測驗時間 40 分鐘:第一部分中譯英(40%)、第二部分英文作文(60%)。
請將下列的一段中文翻譯成通順、達意且前後連貫的英文。
上星期,我的爺爺在浴室滑倒,傷到了膝蓋,從那時起他的腿就一直隱隱作痛。我們帶他去住家附近的一間診所,一位醫師替他做了檢查。醫師說膝蓋沒有受到感染,但傷勢比預期的嚴重,如果不動手術,可能會讓他終身行動不便(cripple)。外科醫生提醒我們,只要保持傷口乾淨,傷口就不會受到感染,而且會癒合得比較快。雖然手術很順利,他還是必須做幾個月的復健(therapy),才能正常走路。幸好,大部分的醫療費用都由全民健保負擔。
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你的英國筆友奧立佛(Oliver)寫信告訴你,他因為嚴重的肺部感染住院一個星期,現在雖然已經回家,但還在休養,覺得很無聊。請寫一封回信給他:
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Last week, my grandfather slipped in the bathroom and injured his knee, and his leg has ached ever since. We took him to a clinic near our house, where a physician examined him. The physician said there was no infection in his knee, but the injury was more serious than expected, and without surgery it might cripple him for life. The surgeon reminded us that if we keep the wound clean, it will not get infected and will heal faster. Although the surgery went well, he must have physical therapy for several months before he can walk normally. Fortunately, most of the medical costs are covered by national health insurance.
上星期,我的爺爺在浴室滑倒,傷到了膝蓋,從那時起他的腿就一直隱隱作痛。
Last week, my grandfather slipped in the bathroom and injured his knee, and his leg has ached ever since.
slip 是「滑倒」;injure 指意外造成的身體傷害,常用被動語態,如 be injured in an accident。ache 當動詞是「持續隱隱作痛」,主詞是疼痛的部位(his leg aches)。「從那時起一直」要用現在完成式 has ached,再加 ever since。
我們帶他去住家附近的一間診所,一位醫師替他做了檢查。
We took him to a clinic near our house, where a physician examined him.
clinic 是規模比 hospital 小的「診所」;physician 是 doctor 的較正式說法,寫作時兩者皆可。where 在此是關係副詞,前面加逗號,用來補充說明這間診所,後面接完整子句。
醫師說膝蓋沒有受到感染,但傷勢比預期的嚴重,如果不動手術,可能會讓他終身行動不便(cripple)。
The physician said there was no infection in his knee, but the injury was more serious than expected, and without surgery it might cripple him for life.
「受到感染」可直接用名詞 infection(there was no infection)。more serious than expected 是慣用說法,than 後面省略了 it was。without + 名詞表示「如果沒有…」,等於 if he did not have surgery。cripple 當動詞是「使行動不便、使殘廢」,語氣很重,只用於描述嚴重傷害;「動手術」也可寫 have an operation。
外科醫生提醒我們,只要保持傷口乾淨,傷口就不會受到感染,而且會癒合得比較快。
The surgeon reminded us that if we keep the wound clean, it will not get infected and will heal faster.
surgeon 是「外科醫生」,surgery 則是這個專業或「手術」。if 子句描述未來可能發生的事,if 子句用現在簡單式,主要子句用 will。infect 常用被動語態(be / get infected),will not get infected 與 will heal 共用主詞 it。heal 指傷口、骨頭等「痊癒、癒合」。
雖然手術很順利,他還是必須做幾個月的復健(therapy),才能正常走路。
Although the surgery went well, he must have physical therapy for several months before he can walk normally.
Although 引導讓步副詞子句,句中不可再加 but。「復健」在這裡指 physical therapy(物理治療),therapy 是不可數名詞,「做復健」用 have / do physical therapy。before 引導的時間子句談的是未來,所以用現在簡單式 can walk。
幸好,大部分的醫療費用都由全民健保負擔。
Fortunately, most of the medical costs are covered by national health insurance.
medical 是形容詞,medical costs 是「醫療費用」。be covered by 表示「由(保險)給付」。most of the + 複數名詞作主詞時,動詞配合名詞 costs,所以用 are。Fortunately 是修飾整句的副詞,放句首要加逗號。
Dear Oliver,
I was extremely worried when I heard about your illness, so it was a great relief to learn that you are back home. How are you feeling now? Do you still have any symptoms, such as a cough or a fever?
Please do not rush to get back to normal. My mother always says that a good rest is the best remedy, and your body needs time to heal. If your doctor suggests therapy, follow every step, even when it feels boring. Good medical advice is worth listening to, especially while you are still weak.
Meanwhile, I have a splendid idea. Let's have a video call every Saturday, and I will tell you all the funny things that happen at school. I will also take photos on our class trip so you will not feel left out. Get well soon, and write back when you can!
Your friend, Jerry
親愛的奧立佛:
聽到你生病的消息時,我非常擔心,所以得知你已經回到家,真是讓我鬆了一大口氣。你現在感覺怎麼樣?你還有咳嗽或發燒之類的症狀嗎?
請不要急著恢復到原來的樣子。我媽媽總是說,好好休息是最好的良方,你的身體需要時間痊癒。如果醫師建議你做復健,每一個步驟都要確實完成,即使覺得很無聊也一樣。正確的醫療建議值得好好聽從,尤其是在你還很虛弱的時候。
同時,我有個絕佳的主意。我們每個星期六視訊吧,我會告訴你學校裡發生的所有好笑的事。我也會在班遊時替你拍照片,這樣你就不會覺得被冷落了。祝你早日康復,有空記得回信!
你的朋友, 傑瑞
本題是寫給朋友的「書信型」作文,格式要完整:以 Dear + 名字 開頭,結尾用 Your friend, 加署名。第一段先回應對方的處境,表達關心,再用問句了解對方現況,回應題目第一點。第二段提出休息、遵照醫囑等具體建議,回應第二點的前半。第三段說明自己能做的事(每週視訊、拍班遊照片),最後用 Get well soon 這類祝福語收尾。書信的語氣要親切自然,可以用問句和 Let's 句型拉近距離,避免只列出建議而沒有感情。
so it was a great relief to learn that you are back home
so 引導結果:因為先前很擔心,所以得知對方回家時特別安心。so 前面加逗號,前後各是一個完整句子。It was a relief to + 原形動詞是「做…讓人鬆了一口氣」的常用句型。
It started to rain, so we stayed home.
開始下雨了,所以我們待在家裡。
even when it feels boring
even when 引導讓步副詞子句,意思是「即使在…的時候」,用來強調:就算覺得無聊,也要照著做。
She smiles even when she is tired.
她即使累了也會微笑。
a clinic near our house, where a physician examined him
where 是關係副詞,先行詞是地點 a clinic。前面有逗號,表示它是補充說明,不是用來限定「哪一間」診所。
We visited Tainan, where my uncle lives.
我們去了台南,我叔叔就住在那裡。
if we keep the wound clean, it will not get infected and will heal faster
對未來可能發生的事做假設:If + 現在簡單式, S + will + 原形動詞。if 子句裡不能用 will。
If you study hard, you will pass the test.
如果你用功讀書,就會通過考試。
so you will not feel left out
so (that) 子句表示目的:「為了讓…」,後面多接 will、can 等助動詞(敘述過去的事時改用 would、could)。和表示結果的 so 不同,目的用法的 so 前面通常不加逗號。
I set an alarm so I will not be late.
我設了鬧鐘,這樣才不會遲到。
Meanwhile, I have a splendid idea.
Meanwhile 表示「在此同時」,用來轉入新的話題或段落,讓信的結構更清楚。
Dinner is cooking. Meanwhile, I will set the table.
晚餐正在煮,同時我來擺餐桌。
| 單字 | 本回用法 |
|---|---|
| ache | My leg aches. 我的腿隱隱作痛(v.,本回用法);also aches and pains 各種痠痛(n.) |
| clinic | see a doctor at a clinic 到診所看醫生;a dental clinic 牙科診所 |
| cripple | cripple sb for life 使某人終身行動不便(v.);cripple 當名詞指人有歧視意味,現在不宜使用,需要時說 a disabled person |
| heal | The wound will heal. 傷口會癒合(v.,不及物);heal a wound 治好傷口(及物);Time heals all wounds. 時間能治癒一切傷痛 |
| illness | a serious illness 重病;suffer from an illness 患病(illness 指生病的狀態,disease 指具體的疾病種類) |
| infect | be infected by germs 被細菌感染;get infected 受到感染(v.,常用被動語態) |
| infection | a throat infection 喉嚨感染;a sign of infection 感染的徵兆(n.) |
| injure | be injured in a car accident 在車禍中受傷;injure one's knee 傷到膝蓋(v.,指意外造成的傷害) |
| medical | medical costs 醫療費用;medical advice 醫療建議;a medical checkup 健康檢查(adj.) |
| physician | a family physician 家庭醫師;see a physician 看醫師(比 doctor 正式) |
| remedy | a home remedy 家庭偏方;the best remedy for a cold 治療感冒的最佳辦法(n.) |
| surgeon | a heart surgeon 心臟外科醫生;a plastic surgeon 整形外科醫生 |
| surgery | have surgery on one's knee 膝蓋動手術;The surgery went well. 手術很順利(n.,不可數) |
| symptom | flu symptoms 流感症狀;a symptom of stress 壓力的徵兆 |
| therapy | physical therapy 物理治療、復健;speech therapy 語言治療(n.,不可數) |
| extreme | extremely worried 非常擔心(字表為形容詞 extreme,本回用其副詞 extremely);extreme weather 極端天氣 |
| relief | a great relief 大大鬆一口氣;It is a relief to + V 做…令人放心 |
| splendid | a splendid idea 絕佳的主意;a splendid view 壯麗的景色 |
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